Previous attempts here and here
The love of a husband
There is something in me,
That doesnt allow me to sleep,
When I see that frown,
Of about to emerge anger in your face.
That something, drives away my peace,
Till I can restore that smile in your eyes.
That something doesn’t listen,
To my ever-concious mind,
Which says, the reason for that impending anger,
is,but whimsical…
That little thing in my heart called love,
Makes me apologize to you,
For that mistake I never did!
12 comments:
Sweet!:)
@casement
thansk!
You are going to have one very lucky husband. Good poetry :-)
One thing that I find hard is apologizing to loved ones when I feel I am not in the wrong (most times :) )
nice love. if we get angry with some one, sure we have a big love on them.
wow
"That little thing in my heart called love,
Makes me apologize to you,
For that mistake I never did!"
pottu thaakareenga.
Hmmm..
so if we apologise, we will feel better.
we feel better so we apologise.
That is love? May be love is also some kind of a selfishness? who cares!
nice post:)
love of a husband... kuzhapamai irrukku... ithu love of a wife'ukku porutham eennaaal husband apologise mattum panninaal pothathu, koodavay alva + poo + ponn nagai... vangi vanthaal thaun punnagai parka mudiyum.
makes me apologize for that
mistake i never made...
very true... i've felt that feeling many times..
unconditional love...
understanding love...
good one
@monu,vinesh, smiley...
unconditional love...
Amen!
For that mistake I never did!
- was a killer line!
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