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Sunday, February 26, 2006

Many forms has thou....3

Previous attempts here and here

The love of a husband

There is something in me,
That doesnt allow me to sleep,
When I see that frown,
Of about to emerge anger in your face.

That something, drives away my peace,
Till I can restore that smile in your eyes.
That something doesn’t listen,
To my ever-concious mind,
Which says, the reason for that impending anger,
is,but whimsical…

That little thing in my heart called love,
Makes me apologize to you,
For that mistake I never did!

12 comments:

Casement said...

Sweet!:)

monu said...

@casement
thansk!

thennavan said...

You are going to have one very lucky husband. Good poetry :-)

Jayan said...

One thing that I find hard is apologizing to loved ones when I feel I am not in the wrong (most times :) )

Jeevan said...

nice love. if we get angry with some one, sure we have a big love on them.

Ganesh said...

wow
"That little thing in my heart called love,
Makes me apologize to you,
For that mistake I never did!"
pottu thaakareenga.

Iris said...

Hmmm..
so if we apologise, we will feel better.
we feel better so we apologise.
That is love? May be love is also some kind of a selfishness? who cares!
nice post:)

tamilan said...

love of a husband... kuzhapamai irrukku... ithu love of a wife'ukku porutham eennaaal husband apologise mattum panninaal pothathu, koodavay alva + poo + ponn nagai... vangi vanthaal thaun punnagai parka mudiyum.

Vinesh said...

makes me apologize for that
mistake i never made...

very true... i've felt that feeling many times..

smiley said...

unconditional love...
understanding love...
good one

Iris said...

@monu,vinesh, smiley...
unconditional love...
Amen!

Prabu Karthik said...

For that mistake I never did!
- was a killer line!