Reality
when his fantasies took flight
he would let his pen have free reign
yet in reality
he was as humdrum as humdrum could be.....
Perception
take 1
"Dress as you want to be...."
she had heard.....
As she expected better things from life
She took care to look professional
Yet, to all those people
She was only her designation-
the house keeping lady!
Take 2
To all the others
it was a just an 18 month-old girl
who was yet to begin speaking
trying to convey her need
though little gestures and actions
But to her own mother
the little girl was showing signs
of being a great dancer!
:)
14 comments:
Take 2 : A dancer in the making. A good one.
@fathima
thanks
:)
Hey gayu, inspired by u, wrote 2 posts(Simple,Stage-3) in my blog
@fathima
am flattered
will check it out!
:)
Take 2 :- cool one ..
how bout addin baby's perspective also :)
Take 2, kalakkal ! Try your hand at tamiol poetry too. U can get these published in the mags like vigadan, Kumudham, etc.
@amol
thanks
:)
will try out your suggestion..
@jayan
thanks
:)
tamil poetry.....tamil a yen kolai pannanam nu paakkaren!!
:)
Like everyone said ... Take 2 was cool!
Its surprising how you can come up with two takes on the same topic and yet they are not related in any other way!
@gayathri
thanks :)
i loved your latest post....
perception can have many shades to it
:)
@gayathri
and i saw a mother do that
:)
Take 1 conveys a lot of meaning too... nice.
@johnny boy
thanks!
:)
"tamil poetry.....tamil a yen kolai pannanam nu paakkaren!!"
Englisha kola pannadhu podhummnu dhaan ;)
@jayan
aamaam
english kolai pannardhunaala
:)
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