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Friday, July 15, 2005

Early Morning Scribbling

Reality

when his fantasies took flight
he would let his pen have free reign
yet in reality
he was as humdrum as humdrum could be.....


Perception

take 1

"Dress as you want to be...."
she had heard.....
As she expected better things from life
She took care to look professional
Yet, to all those people
She was only her designation-
the house keeping lady!


Take 2

To all the others
it was a just an 18 month-old girl
who was yet to begin speaking
trying to convey her need
though little gestures and actions

But to her own mother
the little girl was showing signs
of being a great dancer!

:)

14 comments:

Fathima said...

Take 2 : A dancer in the making. A good one.

monu said...

@fathima
thanks
:)

Fathima said...

Hey gayu, inspired by u, wrote 2 posts(Simple,Stage-3) in my blog

monu said...

@fathima
am flattered
will check it out!
:)

Amol said...

Take 2 :- cool one ..
how bout addin baby's perspective also :)

Jayan said...

Take 2, kalakkal ! Try your hand at tamiol poetry too. U can get these published in the mags like vigadan, Kumudham, etc.

monu said...

@amol
thanks
:)
will try out your suggestion..

@jayan
thanks
:)
tamil poetry.....tamil a yen kolai pannanam nu paakkaren!!
:)

G3 said...

Like everyone said ... Take 2 was cool!


Its surprising how you can come up with two takes on the same topic and yet they are not related in any other way!

monu said...

@gayathri

thanks :)
i loved your latest post....
perception can have many shades to it
:)

monu said...

@gayathri

and i saw a mother do that
:)

johnny boy said...

Take 1 conveys a lot of meaning too... nice.

monu said...

@johnny boy

thanks!
:)

Jayan said...

"tamil poetry.....tamil a yen kolai pannanam nu paakkaren!!"

Englisha kola pannadhu podhummnu dhaan ;)

monu said...

@jayan
aamaam
english kolai pannardhunaala
:)