wrote this for a friend of mine....many years back..i have the yellowing paper
with me as i type this and the date says :21/3/2000....
You Can
where has gone the fire in your eyes?
where has gone the spirit of your soul?
where is the confidence that saw you through?
where is the smile that graced your face?
where is the glimpse of you within you?
don't tell me that you have lost!
dont tell me that you have given up
till now having fought....
the bloodiest battles that you have stood
dont tell me, a minor pierce has shook you!
is it you,or is it someone else that i see?
there were those days and then today...
lost are the days, when you changed a possible failure
today you change a possible success
why do you shiver, my friend?
I have looked up to you when i was unsure...
why do you shiver, my friend?
please look within, revive your spirit
for , right now, i see you perishing...
these are days of sadnes i know
but look upto the days of joy
and see how you can make those yours!
I know my friend, what sorrow is
but you are not the ordinary, you can fight!
Don't tell me you can't, I know
who you are and i tell you, "you can"
14 comments:
A nice piece there, a sort of inspiration and it is welldone. Flowers !!!
Jeeeez,
Thats so cool. You are indeed a poet!!! Wish I could write something like that. BTW just now I was pissed with something...real boost...thanks dude
extremely well written...thought provoking.....kudos!!!
"why do you shiver, my friend?
I have looked up to you when i was unsure...
why do you shiver, my friend?
please look within, revive your spirit"
Nice! :)
Echoos me.. where were you when i needed inspiration?? nice one!
WoW! Your poem does inspire.Good one monu!
@jac
thanks..i worte to inspire a frined of mine...
:)
@aravind..
glad to be of some help..my scribblings..
@sharana
thanks..i guess most of us write well when it is from our heart..this one was....
@gayathri
:)
thanks!
@sriram
thanks..i thought you were self-motivated...
:)
@divs
thank you divs..typed it yesterday evening....
:)
Wow Great, I just found your blog and love it.
For this piece I just want to say its great and Its just what I needed.
@anonymous
keep visiting...
:)
You have inspired more than one.
@jac
:)
thats certainly encouraging to me!
Came across your profile while reading your comments on jikku's posting - glad I found this blog....
'You Can' is wonderful! :-)
@vasundhara
Thanks for visiting and keep coming back
:)
you have wrote something very good there.
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