The little boy pierced a piece of elastic
With a tiny pin
The elastic was rather strong and thick
But the boy persisted
By putting a little bit more pressure
Right on the pin’s head
The poor elastic,
There was so much it could bear.
And the pin made its way through
Tearing the once strong elastic into pieces
3 comments:
i hardly come to blog world now a days. last night as I was checking my favorites, i found your page and just for a causual visit came to see any thing interesting. I read this post last night around my timing 00 hrs. As I woke up- your post was lingering in my heart - couldnt resist to read agan and again. this is really worth a poem with a subtle message hard
thank you.
i was waiting for a response.
am glad u liked it
The elastic was rather strong and thick
But the boy persisted
By putting a little bit more pressure
Right on the pin’s head
still no luck and when he released his finger the pin shot back at him :) at time criticism backfires too :)
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