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Wednesday, July 13, 2005

The parting moment..

At that moment of parting
there was a deafening silence
as the eyes spoke a thousand words
and expressions conveyed a thousand emotions
the unforgiving world translated the silence
as insensitivity....

27 comments:

AF said...

Nice one

Aravind said...

hmm...niraye yosicha piragu dhan purijadhu..
:-)

johnny boy said...

hmm... There are times when silence can get really defeaning.
It can convey a lot more, than words, if the people concerned, understand each other...

Sriram said...

Awww.... pirivil oru aarambham? ;)

johnny boy said...

By the way, jus a doubt, do you write such stuff from experiences in your life, or by even seeing all this happen in a friends life, somethin like that ? Or are you just letting your imagination take wing?

Prabu Karthik said...

@johny walker boy;

ellam kalandhu dhaan ipdi ellam eludha mudiyum;

aana velila kandippa "ellam totalla imgaination" nu dhaan solla mudiyum purinchukko :)

@monu

beautifully written.

johnny boy said...

@pk
Got your hint.... :))) Nee sollaradhum unmay thaan..
Thats why I am askin this... There has to be an experience somewhere :))

Narayanan Venkitu said...

I know...I know....Please don't take me there.

An example ( not related to parting) - When my wife went for her c-section to deliver our first daughter she was afraid..and god..I still remember ...how she looked at me...just as they took her in.!!)

Kaps said...

Is any of your close colleague moving to a new job. why two parting / job change related posts on the same day?

Jayan said...

Good one ! I notice that most of your poems are mawkish.

Neyargal viruppam : Some funny poems too please !!

monu said...

@af
thank u!

monu said...

@aravind
hmm....
appadiyaa irukku en ezhuthu??
jus kidding....

monu said...

@johnny boy
u r right!
:)

and as far as inspiration is concerned.....god knows...cant reveal my trade secret..
jus kidding....
i dont know..okay..i get these weird ideas..sometimes from watching other people...god knows!!!

monu said...

@sriram

may be....
:)

monu said...

@pk
thank you!
:)

monu said...

@narayanan venkitu

:)
yes..that look can convey a thousand feelings...
:)

monu said...

@kaps

are u interested in being a psychologist.......
:)

monu said...

@jayan

beyar viruppam accepted...
but naan nalla naalulaye dumb jokes thaan solluven..try pannaren...if u want a sample of my joke..please see dumb joke #1 in my archives...adha paathuttu neenga ippady kekka maatteenga...


and what is "mawkish"????????

Jayan said...

mawkish = sentimental/emotional

Fathima said...

Gud one Gayu!

monu said...

@jayan
thanks for the info

@fathima
thanks ma!
:)

ada-paavi!!!! said...

late pathen, annal latest a solleran,


romba think pannen,
onnuma yeanoda chinna moolaikku varalillai, sorry no latest comment,

motivated by this silent friend of urs?

(mudunchal unmaia sollungal)

monu said...

@vatsan
i meant that...piriyum bothu ethuvume pesaama iruppaanga theriyumaa?
avanga kannaala aayiram vishayam pesuvaanga

ambuttu thaan!
:)

reetuashwin said...

Beautiful One Gayu..

priya said...

this is brilliant... and what makes it more poignant is the fact that we all get misunderstood.. so i think, most of the ppl can relate to it...

monu said...

@priya

thanks

monu said...

@reetu
thanks!!!