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Wednesday, July 20, 2005

the comet.....

The comet called pain
also comes with a tail called optimism


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The sad one

All that pain, they said
made her a sorrow tale.....

Alas! They didn't see
the streak of optimism underneath!
:)

6 comments:

Narayanan Venkitu said...

Most people see the top and ignore the rest.! They inspect the top layers only.! They don't care about what's inside.

Take color - Beneath the skin its all same.! But see the prejudice.! God..!!

Both are good...I liked the 1st one, the 2nd made me think a little.!

sharana said...

Meaningfully subtle.....very well put!!!

Manoj said...

awesome

M.

monu said...

@narayanan venkitu

you are right...it is a superficial world sometimes....

:)

monu said...

@sharana

thanks
:)

monu said...

@manoj

thanks
:)