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Monday, July 04, 2005

Bitter Reality

as her in-laws ill-treated her
and fed her the left-overs
and bruised her heart
and shattered her dreams

she could only think of
how much her parents loved her
and bore it all in silence
for not wanting to burden them anymore!

14 comments:

ioiio said...

as they ill-treated her
and fed her the left-overs
and bruised her heart
and shattered her dreams

she bore it bcoz she knows they are enduring atleast ten times more problems than her while doing all this

ada-paavi!!!! said...

yaro monu va inda madri treat panaranga?
illai aval yarova ippadi treat panarava??
onnuma puriyala,
poetry puriyanam na moolai venum, ada than adamanam vecchi oru quater vangittena nan!

monu said...

@ioiio

i dont get you!!!!

monu said...

@srivatsan
LOL

adhu oru karpanai kadhai..
but happens in the society right?
:)

csy0182 said...

Not burdening ur parents with ur worries... is that what ur talking abt?

monu said...

@sanju
nopes...
i made a slight correction in the verse....check it out!

its not auto-biographical...ppl

csy0182 said...

Are u talking abt whom I think u r talking abt?

monu said...

@sanju

lets us talk this off - line
i dont know whon you are talking about.....

GS said...

hmm ... bitter reality for sure!

monu said...

@gayathri
:(
what to do....

karma said...

romba too much soagam.....

monu said...

@aravind

:(
will try to write to some cheerful stuff!

Kaps said...

looks like it is from some mega serial

monu said...

@kaps

not necessarily...
not metti oli inspired..it happens really...
it does...though you may not think that it does..it does!
:(